In Silence and tears/ Half broken hearted/ To sever for years
The smile on your mouth was the deadest thing
Whats Christmas time without there be/ some other in the house than we!
I think of thee my thoughts do twine and bud/ about thee as wild vines about a tree
The waterlogged earth/ gulping for breath at our feet
I reach/ towards a hatch that opens on an endless sky/ to fall or fly
But today/ it is my father who keeps stumbling/ behind me and will not go away
ABAB and all tenses to show how he will always be broken hearted from his mistress
First and last stanza sentences rhyme and cyclical structure, 3 stanzas remembering and last stanze reflecting on general love
Iambic tetrameter and varying rhyme scheme to move the narrative forward
Sonnet with a solution at line 7 instead of 8 to show her desperation
Most stanzas tercets (three lines) except last two to show reuniting, swans is the turning point
Sonnet to show his love for his mum and irregular rhyme scheme to reflect his uncertain feelings, less dependent throughout poem
Iambic tetrameter & ABAB rhyme scheme, some half rhymes. First three stanzas on father, two on identity struggle and last roles reversed
Sadness, Grief, Anger, Jealousy
Bitterness, Pessimism, No hope
Pessimism, Frustration, Desire
Desire, Intensity, Fulfillment
Tension, Peace, Fulfillment
Fear, Hope, Ambivalence
Admiration, Frustration, Self Criticism
LOSS MEMORY HEARTBREAK
LOSS MEMORY NATURE
DESIRE NATURE DISTANCE
DESIRE NATURE DISTANCE
NATURE DISTANCE FULFILLMENT
FAMILY INDEPENDENCE GROWING UP
FAMILY GROWING UP NATURE
pale cold grieve
greyish ash & ominous bird a wing...
hare birds mouse
thee twine burst
porcelain skirted
anchor. kite space walk
stumbled stumbling
Thy vows are all broken/ And light is thy fame